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Stained red from a lifetime of green
Curling up with lack of life
Stem longer than the shape
A worm has bitten through the flesh
Either in death or in life.
Rotten remains trim the outline
Remnants of green linger in the veins
Like blood,
green as life was,
still flowing.

The seasons have melted away vivacity
Skin is leathery and apathetic
Indifference comes with decay
The nature of cadavers.
Emaciated little leaf,
Arms curling upon yourself
Wishing to be hugged,
Death has allowed you no comfort.

Stains of brown and black
Spread like mold across the body
Death has already claimed you
Your mother tree still lives
While you,
like the pledged servant of a cruel master,
Die after a lifetime of service.

Wrinkled little leaf,
In nature your abstract body will decompose
and eventually become one again
The correlation of earth and life
Revolves around you.  
©2007-2010 ~heiwateki-jitsuzai
:iconheiwateki-jitsuzai:

Author's Comments

(written 09/22/06 or 22/09/06)
Some more of the old stuff. I found a dead leaf outside one day and took it home. Yeah, I wrote a pem dedicated to it...but I think it was more about death as a whole rather than just the leaf itself. So yeah. Comment, please, if you get the chance.

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:iconsaralerynwinter:
i like how this can have a double meaning...very cool

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~:frail:~ Saraleryn Winter ~:frail:~
:iconheiwateki-jitsuzai:
Thanks! Glad you liked it.

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Last night I watched you sleeping. Once more the nightmare came. I heard you cry out something, a word that sounded like a name. And it hurts me more than I can bare. Knowing part of you I'll never share...never know...
But still. I still believe...
:iconyamiskoi:
I like the references to other things in this beside just a simple leaf dropping off a tree and dying, like to slavery. That was one damn fine similarity you managed to pick up on there. :D
xoxo

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Just a legend cold words on a page,
Lift up my eyes and I'm soaring away,
On silver wings spread out to the sun,
I'm leaving this city for the skies above...
:iconheiwateki-jitsuzai:
:blush: Thanks!

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Last night I watched you sleeping. Once more the nightmare came. I heard you cry out something, a word that sounded like a name. And it hurts me more than I can bare. Knowing part of you I'll never share...never know...
But still. I still believe...
:iconchibi-the-small:
very well written as always ^__^ wow really love how you can just take a simple thing as a leaf and make something really great out of it.

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"Promise me you'll never forget me because if I thought you would I'd never leave!!."
---unknown
:iconheiwateki-jitsuzai:
Thanks :embarrassed:...I had to meditate on it for a while, though, but still.

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Last night I watched you sleeping. Once more the nightmare came. I heard you cry out something, a word that sounded like a name. And it hurts me more than I can bare. Knowing part of you I'll never share...never know...
But still. I still believe...

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